Post by Jack Sparrow on Jun 25, 2010 18:32:22 GMT -7
This is a story I am working on! I will post the chapters.
Chapter 1- How It Started
Once upon a time, in a cozy little adoption center, there was a tiny puppy. Her chocolate fur shone in the light, and her body moved up and down quickly. The sound of the door creaking open awakened her, but she kept her little eyes closed.
"A Lab. I would like a lab." She heard a young voice say. Her breath quickened as she heard footsteps coming closer to her.
"Here are the lab puppies. Come get me when you're done and ready." She heard the crackly voice of the Adoption lady. Feet shuffled near her, and she opened one brown eye. Standing in front of her was a young girl wearing light blue jean shorts and and a pink and white striped tee. Her dark dirty blonde hair was pulled into a ponytail, and she had brown flip flops on her feet.
The young girl smiled at her, as she stood up.
"Aw, a cute little lab puppy." The young girl whispered. Before she knew it, she was in the young girls arms. Not in the basket where her siblings were.
"This one please." She spoke, and the adoption lady peered over her glasses. "A'iight. Sign here. Er, you can set her down if you'd like while yer signing the papers." The young girl nodded and set her down. She looked over the line that read 'Canine's Name:' "Hey there Lady!" The young girl said to the puppy. The puppy cocked her head and looked at the girl. "What should I- Wait a minute. You listened when I said Lady! That's it! Lady!" The young girl shouted, and Lady looked confused.
What is with this girl? What's her name? I know I'll jump on her lap and see what her name is! Lady thought. She attempted to jump on the girl's lap, but suddenly the old adoption lady scooped her up. "I'm going to take her into the back to make a certificate." She grumbled, and her soon-to-be owner nodded.
In the back, the adoption lady set Lady down on the counter and brought over an ink pad. Lady could read her name tag. It read Millie. "Alright Lady, stay here." She croaked, and brought over a paper that read Lady's information. Millie took Lady's paw and pressed it into the ink pad, then on the paper. "Done." Millie said, and took Lady out to the young girl who was waiting eagerly behind the counter with a few papers in her hand.
"Here is Lady, and her certificut." Millie said, and looked at the papers. "Good luck with her, Courtney." She said, with a smile. Courtney nodded, and held Lady close to her. "Ready to go home?" She whispered.
Lady barked happily as Courtney sat her down in the living room. She handed Lady some toys, and smiled. "Be a good girl while I am gone. I will be back with a surprise!" Courtney said, heading out the door. Lady sighed.
"I hope it's a brand new bone." Lady said. If Courtney was here, all she'd hear was barking. After a half hour of chewing on a bone, Lady heard Courtney exit her car.
"She's home!" Lady screamed, and ran towards the door. In Courtney's hands, she held a box. "Lady! I missed you too! But guess what I got!" With that, Courtney set down the box and took off the cover. Sitting in that beautiful white box was ANOTHER LAB.
Continuing soon! Tell me what you think! ;D
Chapter 1- How It Started
Once upon a time, in a cozy little adoption center, there was a tiny puppy. Her chocolate fur shone in the light, and her body moved up and down quickly. The sound of the door creaking open awakened her, but she kept her little eyes closed.
"A Lab. I would like a lab." She heard a young voice say. Her breath quickened as she heard footsteps coming closer to her.
"Here are the lab puppies. Come get me when you're done and ready." She heard the crackly voice of the Adoption lady. Feet shuffled near her, and she opened one brown eye. Standing in front of her was a young girl wearing light blue jean shorts and and a pink and white striped tee. Her dark dirty blonde hair was pulled into a ponytail, and she had brown flip flops on her feet.
The young girl smiled at her, as she stood up.
"Aw, a cute little lab puppy." The young girl whispered. Before she knew it, she was in the young girls arms. Not in the basket where her siblings were.
"This one please." She spoke, and the adoption lady peered over her glasses. "A'iight. Sign here. Er, you can set her down if you'd like while yer signing the papers." The young girl nodded and set her down. She looked over the line that read 'Canine's Name:' "Hey there Lady!" The young girl said to the puppy. The puppy cocked her head and looked at the girl. "What should I- Wait a minute. You listened when I said Lady! That's it! Lady!" The young girl shouted, and Lady looked confused.
What is with this girl? What's her name? I know I'll jump on her lap and see what her name is! Lady thought. She attempted to jump on the girl's lap, but suddenly the old adoption lady scooped her up. "I'm going to take her into the back to make a certificate." She grumbled, and her soon-to-be owner nodded.
In the back, the adoption lady set Lady down on the counter and brought over an ink pad. Lady could read her name tag. It read Millie. "Alright Lady, stay here." She croaked, and brought over a paper that read Lady's information. Millie took Lady's paw and pressed it into the ink pad, then on the paper. "Done." Millie said, and took Lady out to the young girl who was waiting eagerly behind the counter with a few papers in her hand.
"Here is Lady, and her certificut." Millie said, and looked at the papers. "Good luck with her, Courtney." She said, with a smile. Courtney nodded, and held Lady close to her. "Ready to go home?" She whispered.
Lady barked happily as Courtney sat her down in the living room. She handed Lady some toys, and smiled. "Be a good girl while I am gone. I will be back with a surprise!" Courtney said, heading out the door. Lady sighed.
"I hope it's a brand new bone." Lady said. If Courtney was here, all she'd hear was barking. After a half hour of chewing on a bone, Lady heard Courtney exit her car.
"She's home!" Lady screamed, and ran towards the door. In Courtney's hands, she held a box. "Lady! I missed you too! But guess what I got!" With that, Courtney set down the box and took off the cover. Sitting in that beautiful white box was ANOTHER LAB.
Continuing soon! Tell me what you think! ;D
I have actually done custom music before but I have never had any issues with it. You could try renaming it as one of the original songs and remove the original song from the songz folder.